There is this frog named James bond. He is a superhero. He saves the lives of fishes and humans too! So He has a secret hide-out to plan who's life he's going to save. James has this red error light. When there is trouble hes screen turns on to see what is happening. He can see that lemon shark the villain of the pond. He gos out to town while the lemon shark approaches too. When they both reached town James said "You better get out of my town Mr.Lemon face!"
"Or what?" said the lemon shark.
"Or else Ill screw you out of town!" So then the shark was so shy he just swam away.
Monday, February 9, 2009
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You have started to describe the main character very well. The conflict/problem is sounding exciting. How could you also make your ending exciting?
I like your story but I am afraid of frogs.
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