Monday, February 23, 2009
A big accident
One day there was traffic allot then one guy was going to fast. next thing you know. Bang! Boom! Crash! Ker-plunk he crashed into everyone and I mean everyone. The police his neighbors his friends and his son Robert's school. They took away his and his name was tom his family was sad that day.They let him out early because he took classes about what to do in traffic. His family was so exited they all hugged him and asked him questions all night.
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I like the story,but you just need to put a little bit more into it,like what kind of questions did they ask, but you did really good.
Also I liked the Bang! BOOM! CRASH! Ker-plunk in the story.
It was EXELLENT
Amanda
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