Tuesday, February 10, 2009
The Super One
One day a super baby was born. It was a girl and her name was Amelia. She lived in a small house with her two big brothers Ethan and John and three little sisters Amy, Ida and Elizabeth. They were a poor family. So many days there mother would go with out food. One day Amelia got the idea to put on a show and raise money for the family. When she was done she counted the money ''One.. two..three..four''and Amelia went on.She had raised one hundred dollars! She was so excited that she put on another show and another and another and by the end of the week her family had one million dollars and five scents. One day a villain named Dr.Zakaiv went to one of her shows. He had a plan to kidnap Amalia and her family. But Amelia could hear people's thoughts. She covered the house windows with salt and made a circle of sugar around the house because that was the only thing that could lock Dr.Zakaiv out of the house. When Dr.Zakaiv arrived at the house he could not get in but he could fly over the house and into the sunroof of the house. That was what he did when he got in the house he snatched Amelia but he could not find anyone else so he left. When the family got out of their hiding places and tried to find Amelia.''Amelia Amelia where are you Amelia.'' cried her mother Lea. ''Were you.''said the youngest sister Ida. Finally Lea found the phone and called 911. When the police asked Lea were Amelia was she said With a man called Dr.Zakaiv. When the police found where Dr.Zakaiv lived they looked around the place and didn't find them but one police Found a tunnel and went in he found them Amelia was tied up in ropes and Dr. Zakaiv was wiping her. She was bleeding badly.The police arrested Dr. Zakaiv and presented him with life in prison.After five years Dr.Zakaiv died in prison.Amelia became a police remembering what had happened to her when she was a child and her two big brothers Ethan and John They became people who fix computers and her three little sisters went to Harvard. They all lived happily ever after.THE END
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Wow! What an amazing story Lauren! You have followed all the elements of plot within your writing (beginning, problem/conflict, solution) so as the reader it was understandable - I could understand what the characters were going through. You also had very creative ideas. I look forward to reading more of you story's during our creative writing sessions.
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