Once upon a time there lived a ninja pond turtle. That fights the forces of evil, and he was the best super hero in the world. So one day he went to war for his own country. Then when he came back he had no wound any were on his body. So he broth peace to his world. The
other day he woke up and herd danger in his country. So he found out that he was going against a giant robot. So it took him ten seconds to defeat the robot.
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You have started to describe your character well. Spend a bit more time describing what happens during the problems/conflicts (going to war and defeating the robot) so it makes it more exciting for the reader.
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