Monday, March 30, 2009

Land and water

Water
wet,salty
rolling,swishing,swaying
the water is deep,the land is shallow
growing,living,breathing
dry,hard
Land

2 comments:

Miss Hurst said...

This poem has excellent imagery because you have use describtive vocabulary.
How can water be sandy?

chad levy said...

hello good job on your commas and nice descriptive words !!!