Tuesday, March 24, 2009
The journey of the Blue Blob.
Once upon a time there lived a Blue Blob in a world called Blue Land. One day the Blue Blob was sent to destroy the earth because his Queen told him, but he did not. He didn't want to destroy the earth because it was so beautiful, he never felt so free from listening to his queen yelling at him all the time to do something for her, so he did his own thing. He then decided to go to the beach, when the people saw him they all ran a way because they thought that he was going to hurt them, but he tried to tell them that he was not going to, but only one person stayed, the Blue Blob asked him what is your name? he said my name is Preston, what is yours? its the Blue Blob. So they both went down by the beach and started to swim around. After they were finished swimming, they went to Preston's house to take a bath and get dressed, so they could get a quick nap. When they woke from their nap, they went to the park to play tag, your it. The Blue Blob had so much fun with Preston, he decided to stay and protect the earth.
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This story has an excellent beginning as you introduce the main character well and give us a peek into what the problem will be.
Why was Preston not afraid of the Blue blob?
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