Tuesday, March 24, 2009

The dinosaur egg

Ones upon a time a little boy went hunting and a dinosaur egg fell in front of him and he picked it up and ran home with it and shod his family and they were interested. Then a few days later it hatched. Then the little dinosaur was hungry and bit the little boy and then he smelt a fish when the dinosaur was bigger. His rider was impressed.


2 comments:

Lauren said...

I like your story but I could not understand some of it because your grammer is a bit wrong.

Anonymous said...

I liked your story because you said the dinosaur was bigger and stronger.But I don't understand your second sentence.