My home is big, my home wide,
My home is slender, my home is slide.
My bedroom is big, my bedroon is wide,
My bedroom is cute, as you and I.
My bed is big, my bed is wide, my bed is pink, so give me a wink.
My pool is big, my pool is wide, my pool cool come take a dive.
My home is my home is my home sweet home.
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Splosh, Splash!14 years ago
8 comments:
I like your post.Because part of my room is also pink.
Great rhyming words! It sounds like a poem Dr. Seuss might write. Maybe you could publish this as a picture book for little children to read...:)
goog description but next time dont write it in purple and blue.
Emily I like your story but I can not read it that well because of the font color.
Do you mean cylinder instead of slender?What do you mean by my home is slide?It has good that you only have 1 incorret word
I love all of your sentences but I can't read some of them because of all of the colors.
googd job on colors
Eimly use a diffrent colr next time and i can't see with purle.
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