Food,
Delicious,Tasty
Food has more taste,Water has less taste,
Wet,See through,
Water.
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Splosh, Splash!14 years ago
7 comments:
You have used some good adjectives. Remember to be consistent with your tense - "is" not "was".
I like the part were the food was delicous.
I like your diamante poem but some of your words don't make sence.
You have good use of commas.
You need more detail.
I like how you put descriptive words.
I like how you think about food story.
sounds good
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