Jack and Bill went to the museum. They looked at this mysterious button through a peek hole in the safe. They tried to open the safe. Jack found a key, he tried to open the safe. Bill found a red button. Then Jack push the button and Bill sad no. Then Jack and Bill were in time traveling. They did not no where they were. They looked around and Bill found a little girl she was walking to her house. They followed her. Then Jack found the red button, and Bill push the button. They were dizzy. Then t+hey ran home.
THE END
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5 comments:
I like your story too emliy and it is nices too.
Thankyou Shania that is verey nices.
you well come emily.
You have written an exciting beginning. Think about a way you can make your ending exciting too.
I think that was exiting.I think your ending was a little exiting.
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