Monday, January 19, 2009

Don't push the butin

Jack was in the mall and he was in a shop. There was a red button that he wanted to push. The button was in the back by the ed cashier.When jack push the button the building souk like a earthquake.When the building finished shaking jacks parents came to look for him. When his parents found him they were very mad, and they never got to buy the pair of shoes he wanted to buy that were very cool. store name shoow shop.


2 comments:

Lauren said...

Your story is great! You have some undercases that are sopposed to be capital though.

Anonymous said...

I like your story too. And It is cool too.