Tuesday, November 11, 2008
The hurricane
When Hurricane Paloma came it was worst than I thought.I live by the water and the other side was flooded because it was closer to the ground but live on the other side.It was hard to take a bath cause I lost water at 10:00 and at 12:00 the light was blinking then it was gone but I did not like at all.
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2 comments:
Great description and good use of personal voice. Almost all of your punctuation was correct too, so well done.
Oh, please do not write in red as it is very hard to read. Thank you!
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